Caligula's Launderette

I heart the last one very much...here's your 8.75! cheers hon CL

I just thought I'd start a par-tay for myself at my new VIP status! w00t! CL is Pink...see that...yes that...yes that is my name, yep that would be the color ...

I love Arvy cause he has a brain! *jumps him and gives him a giant hug* well, and for other things...mumblemumblemumble

23 (oooo more tension)

Wait Superfreakazoid, that's you Ramona right? it's Pseudomuse. Thank you all for such loverly reviews, I'll have to work on the flow some. cheers CL

Thank you Superfreakazoid, I'm glad you liked it. :) cheers CL

Thank you Dream! :) CL

thank you ikklebeastie, teehehe I like your name. You last line I have been trying to figure out for some minutes now, are you trying to say that you found ...

Jojo: The buffalo has indeed budged for the time being. I find that I am unique when it actually comes to writing, I'll sit and sit, with an idea and ...

thanks guys, I love you so. Arvy: hehehe but you are! You homage to me too much my friend. Shriek: Wow, I am touched by your review. Thanks for catching ...

Thankies Dream, bubble, and bob! Dream: I have tried to fix that section, it too irked me. bubble: I indeed write and mean bayed . I know that most of ...

I corrected the mistake, erggg I wish I could type and spell at the same time. oh well. Hehehe (on two poems inspired), now dontcha feel special hon?! :wink: CL

thanks Brian. I found that I only understood the first two stanzas so I am scrapping this piece and starting over again. Thanks again for the crit. CL

Question before we start, should I take out the part about the Keep's history? also the Title is just a working title for now, I'm not sure how much I ...

Lilliane She lays like the night, long black bird lashes Cast against Ivory white chilling skin, Hands folded gently over the dip between her breasts, Her weddingmourn dress pulls at ...